Final Project Working Process 8 and the feedback from Critique (James Worthy)

So during critique was great my class mates thought that it was one if not the best final project that they saw this semester in out sensors class. I was so excited that people thought it was a good concept  and a good design. Charlie said he could really feel the emotion of aloneness and wanting for none to bother it. He said the sound that it made really worked. other students said that the sound reminded of hissing or of like a computer booting but that it worked well with the concept of people shielding themselves and having this defense mechanism. It was asked why it was black and why were the propellers black. I said it was suppose to be a concealment and a camouflage because it didn't want you to get by it any way and the motor aspect was suppose to make you not want to stay by it when you did get by it. one student said that the culture on the top really drew you to want to see the intricate detail in it. (the wire and yard sculpture on the top that resembles the head of the creature to me). Also the thought that maybe if the metal sculpture covered the entire box that would really feel like it was caged in. and if it had some smaller yarn pieces that would blow better when the motors span. one more thing it that if there was sharp metal pieces that would really deter people from coming close. I took careful note of that and I do want to include those things to the piece.

Here is the videos that I took on my phone of the piece working...